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Conrad Rice

  • Other Poetry Re: The Deconstruction of Falling Stars

    The Deconstruction of Falling Stars As the cradle gently rocks and the fire starts to grow Let ashes turn to ashes Let the wind begin to blow Time and time ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: October Afternoons

    Wow, after all these long and detailed reviews I come along with my shrunken opinion. I really like the ideas discussed in this story, memory and the passage of time ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ragnarok

    This was a very well written story. The imagery was very beautiful and I liked it a lot. However, I never understood if this was a girl in a post-apocalyptic ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Sight.

    This was a very moving story. The feelings of the narrator were well-conveyed and I liked that. Have you considered using more well-developed paragraphs perhaps? That might make the story ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Cirque du Abberations

    I liked this. Even with the grammatical errors and such it was a sound story. I only wish that you had continued with it rather than bringing it to such ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Encantado Pt. 2

    Judy went over to Pete and started to help him away. Niles hesitated, but then he saw the faces of the people. They wanted no part of them. This superstition ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Encantado Pt. 1

    Encantado The large boat sat moored on the north bank of the Amazon. The town spilled its light down onto it. The dark rainforest surrounded both the boat and the ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Deleted

    This was a very interesting story, to say the least. I rather liked the main character. He seemed to have a genuine realness to him, if you'll pardon the redundancy. ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Rose

    The Rose It sat in one corner of the park. It sat untouched by the playful rampages of the children. Most plants on that playground didn’t last for very long ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Laurel's Lament

    I liked it better than I thought I would at first. You started off with Laurel down on everybody and had me expecting an ending quite different than the one ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lit

    You reviewed one of my stories so I decided to return the favor. I really don't understand what this is about. Just what is Set out to do, and why ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Doble Cara

    This is an okay poem, imho the only thing that turns me off is all the anger and resentment towards love. That's a personal thing though. Maybe expounding on the ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Favorite Form of Procrastination?

    Video games, big time also music and internet, but not as much as video games particularly Halo 3 and Guitar Hero 3, pure awesome distilled into entertainment.

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Do you carry a notebook with you?

    I can't imagine going anywhere without a notebook. Any little idea I have gets scribbled down, no matter what it is or where I am. Though when you're going down ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Pretty Butterfly

    Pretty Butterfly Donald stood by the side of the road watching the supply trucks go past. Their exhaust hung heavy in the cold February air, creating a miniature cloud that ...

    Apr 17, 2008


If a story is in you, it has to come out.
— William Faulkner